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Auraliel


My first meeting with Auraliel, The Third Light of the Dawn Choir 

It happened at dawn, of course.

Not a dramatic dawn, no trumpets, no fire,  just that quiet, pink-gold moment when the world inhales and hasn’t decided what kind of day it’s going to be.

I was sitting on a fallen column outside a ruined shrine, feet dangling, ink on my fingers, crying a little because I’d  just written myself into a corner where everyone wanted each other and no one was allowed to touch.

I looked up when the light changed.

Auraliel did not arrive. They simply became present, as if the dawn had realised it was meant to be a person.

Six wings unfolded like a held breath finally released. Their form was tall, luminous, precise; light shaped into intention. Their halo hung slightly tilted, inscribed with sigils of vow and restraint, glowing softly as bells chimed somewhere I  couldn’t see.

I stared. Then, I said: “...oh no.”

Auraliel regarded me with an expression of gentle concern usually reserved for mortals standing at the edge of something important.

“Joyous Amorette,” they said, voice layered like choirs heard through morning mist.

“Your words have reached the Third Choir.”


I squinted. “…In a good way?”

Auraliel hesitated. Just a fraction. “Your writings inspire hope,” they continued carefully. “They strengthen devotion. They cause mortals to swear vows with sincerity."

I smiled. “Well, yes. Obviously.”


The halo flickered. “They also,” Auraliel added, “contain… an unusual volume of yearning.”


I looked down at my notebook. Looked back up. “Ah.”


There was a silence, not awkward, exactly, but evaluative. The kind of pause where the Upper Planes check their notes. “We believe,” Auraliel said at last, “that your gift may be refined. Guided. Turned toward righteous ends.”

My  heart thumped. I clutched my notebook to my chest. “You want me to… write better?”

“Holier.”


I considered this. “May holy things ache?”

The question landed like a dropped bell. Light rippled across Auraliel’s wings. The sigils in their halo rearranged themselves, uncertain. “…Explain.”

So I did.

I talked about longing as faith under pressure. About restraint as heat, not absence. About how the space between two people could be sacred….charged,  if treated with care.

I probably talked for a long time.

When I  finally stopped, dawn had fully broken. Birds were singing. The world had decided to continue.

Auraliel was very still, “…This is not how we have framed devotion,” they said slowly.

I smiled, hopefully and unrepentant. “It sells, though.”


Another pause.

“I will sponsor you,” Auraliel said, solemn and radiant, “Under observation.”

I clapped my hands. “Wonderful! I’ll put you in the dedication.”

The halo flared. “…Do not.”

We sealed the pact anyway.

As Auraliel withdrew into the light, I felt warmth settle into my chest; power, yes, but also something like expectation.

I looked down at my notebook, dipped my quill, and wrote:

Chapter One: The angel should never have looked back.

Somewhere in the Upper Planes, Auraliel paused mid-ascent, halo ringing softly with unease.

And that was how it began. 


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